First proof 7-18-13

2015-01-13

azim58 - First proof 7-18-13

email about first proof here
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iginal document\2013HV0047R.docx"

potential edited document here
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ited document\2013HV0047R.docx"

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changes I want to make
-I noticed that references are listed after the punctuation. This seems
unusual.

Several changes to table 2
-The descriptions in Table 2 did not match up with the appropriate
letters and one description was missing.
--Here is how the Table 2 description changes look.

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fIndicates whether the sequence expressed from the Lac promoter in the
bacterial plasmid is frame-shifted relative to the frame of the wild-type
transcript. gIndicates the number of point mutations in the sequence.
hgIndicates how many additional base pairs are present in the sequence
which are not present in the wild type transcript sequence.

Additional citation information
-changed "DH010B Tr electrocompetent cells from Invitrogen. " to "DH010B
T1 electrocompetent cells from Invitrogen (Cat No 12033-015). "
-changed "Grace Biolabs with the Nanoprint 60" to "Grace Biolabs (Cat No
GBL705177) with the Nanoprint 60 "
-changed "GraphPad Prism 4 " to "GraphPad Prism 4 for Windows (GraphPad
Software, La Jolla California USA, www.graphpad.com)"
-changed "Inkscape" to "Inkscape 0.48.4 for Windows (www.inkscape.org)."
-In the sentence in which I mention ImageJ I would like to add a
reference corresponding to the following paper
Schneider, C.A., Rasband, W.S., Eliceiri, K.W. "NIH Image to ImageJ: 25
years of image analysis". Nature Methods 9, 671-675, 2012.
-In the sentence in which I mention the Q Value program I would like to
add a reference corresponding to the following paper
Storey JD. (2002) A direct approach to false discovery rates. Journal of
the Royal Statistical Society, Series B, 64: 479-498.

Minor text edits
-changed fiften to "fifteen"
-changed "library-derived clone was included a negative control" to
"library-derived clone was included as a negative control"
-changed "than biological phenomenon" to "than a biological phenomenon"
-changed "demonstrate that anti-SMC1fs antibody could detect the
anti-SMC1fs protein" to "demonstrate that anti-SMC1Afs antibody could
detect the SMC1Afs protein"
-changed "The lysate slides were stored at -80 C when not in use" to "The
lysate plates plates were stored at -80 C when not in use"

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